Evolved words. No monkeys here.

As far as it goes with the evolution of my writing, the only major thing that's changed would be my vocabulary. After reading a couple of books by F. Scott Fitzgerald, (The Great Gatsby and This Side of Paradise), my choices of words have changed drastically. It was like a crash course on english, which is really something after having experimental teaching styles for english for three years. I sound smarter than a fifth grader now! Also, as I end my infomercial, I noticed that I've tried to make my work more poetic. I don't want to just bluntly say, "This is Spot. Watch him run." I want to tell Spot's story. There has to be something within the depths of that canine head. Therefore, I've tried working on the flow of what I saw as well as how it's put.